Athra Four/Page Ten.
Error and Trial
Again, experimental. A great deal more work needed.
I’ll delve for a minute into the arena of offering unsolicited advice.
Work on something, decide that it’s awful, and start another piece. And just do that over and over and over. A hundred incomplete attempts will furnish you with some lessons. You’ll learn a great deal. That perfect pen and ink drawing in your sketchbook you slaved over for hours and hours… No real lessons from that.
Preview: Athra Four Page Ten
Very nearly complete. And given that it’s so close to being done, I thought I’d post it here as a preview.
I reworked the composition a few times. More and more I think the composition is like the first serve in tennis. If you get the first serve in, then the rest is easy. Same seems to be true of composition. Nail down the composition and everything seems to fall together rather well. That is to say that all the decisions seem to be dictated by the composition and you don’t have to solve very many problems. The composition usually tells you that the elements will have to be weighted a certain way and then it’s just a matter of obeying the dictates the composition laid down.
Needless to say, woe will betide you if the composition is weak.
“Betide” is a good word. Let’s work on bringing that back.
Athra Four/ Page Nine
Kind of tired after this one. I changed it a great deal, worked and reworked it several times. Reworked the overall composition more than a few times. I could use a break after this one.
Any number of difficult problems to solve with this page. I considered drawing the scene out over two pages or so. When I looked over the layouts, however, I thought it bordered on being tedious.
I like the idea of depicting the monster, Kaldgrani, in repose, but I don’t want to dwell on it. The story needs to move on into the impending violence that awaits.
That said, I could still change my mind again and add another page before taking the entire graphic novel to the printer.
Work, Color, Return
I’ve been working on this. Many unresolved problems, issues with it, and with all the other color experiments for that matter.
I’ll probably set this aside for a while and work on some other things. That seems to help.
This is starting to feel overworked and I need to keep some spontaneity.
A Sketch
Looking over the posts, I think that the distaff is, at present, underrepresented. Consider this the first post to address that shortcoming.
In other words, expect more images of women.
I’ve been trying to tighten down and really become more confident about proportions, particularly the proportions of the face. I think this sketch represents an improvement. I don’t doubt that I’ll have reservations and concerns about it tomorrow, but, for the moment, I think it represents a step forward.
Proportions, bane of my drawing existence. I remember pausing half-way through any number of life drawing sessions and realizing that I had made some disastrous mistake in the proportions and having to begin again, basically from scratch.
Apropos of something or other, not sure what exactly, this sketch is part of a larger project. I’ve only made a few brief stabs at turning the idea into something concrete, that is, actual pages. The idea, such as it is, at this point, concentrates on a prehistoric man, Korr, the lone male survivor of a brutal attack on his tribe and his attempt to rescue his wife and children and take revenge on the enemy tribe.
Right now the idea is, in all honesty, really more of a plaything than anything else. I just don’t have the time to devote to it. If I can nail down the general imagery of the book, however, then I should be able to begin generating pages at an acceptable rate.
With any luck, I’ll be able to add a Korr section, to Athra and Spearpunk at some point in the near future.
Best,
Nathaniel Sullivan
Athra Four/Page Eight
Another Wednesday, another new page.
Great working on this page. I kind of work all over the place, working on ten pages or so at a time, moving from one to another without setting any real work order or schedule. I revised this page several times and it bears very little resemblance to the initial page.
Best,
Nathaniel Sullivan
Initial Cuts
Working on an easel. These are rough cut pieces for the base. Once the base is complete, I’ll attach casters and begin work on the frame for the easel.
More than a little concerned about the size of the actual easel. Looking at a design laid out on paper, seven feet or so of time comprising an easel seems like nothing. I mean, after all, these lines on paper… No problem. We have plenty of room for some pencil lines. Our house is three dimensional. We’re three dimensional. An easel comprised of two dimensional lines… That’s nothing.
Now of course I’m beginning to see this seven foot tall, three dimensional, solid wood entity beginning to take shape in the garage and let’s just say I’m more than a little concerned about having it inside.
I wonder what the dogs will think of it.
And my wife.
I kind of wonder what she’ll think. I wonder if we should have talked about this.
I don’t know. Talking never seems to work out for me. With talking, there’s a chance she’ll refuse and I’d just as soon avoid that even if it means dealing with consequences later.
The Pram in the Hall
Cyril Connolly famously wrote “There is no more sombre enemy of good art than the pram in the hall.”
For those who never dated a British girl or boy, or watched Public Television, “Pram” is British for stroller, as in baby stroller.
Connolly had a point. Childcare and art… They’re not friends.
This week has brought that point home to me. My son begins kindergarten on Wednesday, just half days, eight to eleven for this first week. I was father all day yesterday and I’ll be playing that role again today.
I suspect you’ve already gleaned that this is a serious blow to my productivity. Much less work on Athra this week than in weeks past.
On a lighter note, I began trying to establish a Facebook page last night. That really makes me hate myself in some ways.
All this childcare will not, however, prevent the appearance of the new Athra page tomorrow. That’s all set and ready to roll.
And now I have to make breakfast for the beast, or “our son”, as my wife calls him.
And those are scare quotes. So, you know, be afraid of those four little marks.
It is very cold, in kindergarten
My son begins kindergarten (German word, awesome) next week.
One of the kids in his class is named Khan.
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